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if only our life had been different
if only i had been there to make you happy
if only i was as handsome as you said i was sweet
if only you were in my arms then instead of anothers
if only i had been strong enough for you
if only i knew what do do without you in my life
if only it was you in my arms to tell you how i feel and how i felt then
if only i knew why the hell i was still thinking bout you after all this time
if only i could forget the thing that happened between us all the I Love You's
if only we hadnt said forever, and myself meaning it
if only i wasnt so caring then
if only i hadnt, let you so close hadnt let you get ahold of my heart
if onyl i hadnt met you.....

well i did and im a better person because of it... and i dont open my heart open as much
©2007-2009 ~CravenKing
:iconcravenking:

Author's Comments

its just a poem that come to me when i found some old poems and love notes from a old love who still has a small part of my heart till this very day

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:icongothic-faerie6:
Its beautiful...nice work!

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:iconalwaysinthedark:
I WOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I'll be your pain-killer if you be mine. The world is spinning out of control and I have no where else to go. So won't you cry with me this one last time? I don't think I'll get through it tonight.
:iconcravenking:
thanks

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!
:iconalwaysinthedark:
yeah anytime

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I'll be your pain-killer if you be mine. The world is spinning out of control and I have no where else to go. So won't you cry with me this one last time? I don't think I'll get through it tonight.
:iconsanctus-omnius:
*picks pieces of heart off the floor* Someone else deserves these from you, don't keep them discarded.

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These eyes see all, these ears hear all, this mind has seen the ugly future, and this heart bleeds for it... Yet Through this a faint smile appears...In Hoc Signo Vinces.

~--~Sanctus Omnius~--~
:iconcravenking:
thank you :hug:

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!
:icondeadintheend:
Thats a really good one. I like it :)

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.....Broken Promises.....
Stock~End-stock

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