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Thought II by ~CravenKing:iconCravenKing:





of all the things that i want
you are the one......
i talk to you and i wish
that you was mine and i yours
that we was closer to each
that i was the one that make you happy
the one that would wipe away your tear
when you's sad.
well i guess my wish wont come true, but
i still be there for you, through
thick and thin, times of ease and times of hardship.
just remember, if you need me i be there.
©2005-2009 ~CravenKing
:iconcravenking:

Author's Comments

well i know this is kinda sappy, but.... i could care less what other ppl think. well this isnt like my usual poetry so have fun. and if you like it, cool, but if not, state your opinion, and i will state mine.LOL

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:iconart-luv-tmy:
Awwwwwww......
thats soooo pretty :dubious:
:cuddle:
i like this alot more than you would think.

-((:heart:))<-Mal

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There Are 10 Types Of People In This world. Those Who Understand Binary And Those Who Do Not.

"May he(Michael Jackson) be moonwalking with angels, now."-~Neodusk
:iconpartlyblonde:
Aww, That's really sweet and pretty. :tears: Made my eyes water. Keep writing them, I love reading them!!!

:hug: :hug: :hug:

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I can't take away the storm of yesterday, but I can bring the sun in tomorrow

:hug: Live life with arms wide open :hug:
:iconcravenking:
im glad

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!
:iconcravenking:
cool glad you like it. i wrote it for a friend of mine..... art-luv-tmy. but :shh:

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!
:iconnobody99:
aww its really sweet. I like it, it makes me smile :)
My only objection would be the language you chose. I know you pobably did it on purpose, but I think it would have been prettier if it were more sophisticated. But thats just me... :S

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"From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw..."--Poe
:iconcravenking:
i know, but i was a spur of the momment..thing...

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!
:iconart-luv-tmy:
hehe..:giggle:

dont worry i wont tell her..hehe

--
There Are 10 Types Of People In This world. Those Who Understand Binary And Those Who Do Not.

"May he(Michael Jackson) be moonwalking with angels, now."-~Neodusk
:iconcravenking:
cool

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!

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