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through the hills and over the mountains
my heart aches, my mind breaks and my soul dies.
my eyes water and my life washes away as i cry
my life is over, theres noting left, my heart
was stolen, my brain ran away like all the
countless So-called friends of my past who used and abused me
without this heart of mine, I am all but dead
my body moves but there is no one home, my safety net
has broken, all those who would have helped me
have left and care nothing for me, probally never
had, but what can i do but mornfor the loss of me!
My heart is gone and it may never return, my Family is broken, My life as i know it
is gone, dead, over, what did i do? Guess i'll never know
i'll just have to live, change, move on. not let life get me down
cause if my problems take over my life, it is truely over
but remember this My Life Is My Own!
©2006-2008 ~CravenKing
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~DeadInTheEnd:iconDeadInTheEnd: Apr 5, 2006, 9:57:11 PM
:|

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.....Broken Promises.....
Stock~End-stock
~art-luv-tmy:iconart-luv-tmy: Apr 5, 2006, 10:02:05 PM
:hug:

Imma calling j00! >< :D

:heart: :heart: :heart: :love: :date: :love: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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There Are 10 Types Of People In This world. Those Who Understand Binary And Those Who Do Not.
~Vampirelover12191:iconVampirelover12191: Apr 6, 2006, 3:14:29 PM
I like the last line "but remember this MY LIFE IS MY OWN" the best. Good job, and get happier k? :hug:
~CravenKing:iconCravenKing: Apr 6, 2006, 7:20:48 PM
thanks :hug: and i will try, oh yeah i found out y the girl ive liked at my school for long has never given me a chance,:cries:

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

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~camarillo0863:iconcamarillo0863: Nov 15, 2006, 9:48:58 PM
Babe,..you can only give your heart,..if someone doesn't apreciate it,..take it back and reserve it for someone that will cherish it! Yes,..move on,..with your head up high! You're talented even by telling these poems based on your real life?? I have been through sorrows, tragedies and abuses too. Horrible,.I can tell you my life and you'll be shocked. :O Move on and find happiness love!! Kiss****:date: I love the way you express yourself. :)

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"You cannot change the past,..we cannot see the future,..but,..we can certainly modify the present!"
~CravenKing:iconCravenKing: Nov 16, 2006, 1:34:39 PM Mood: Joy
thanks.:P

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!
~Lilium-Frost:iconLilium-Frost: Aug 15, 2007, 8:28:55 PM
my.. that is very depressing =(.
~CravenKing:iconCravenKing: Aug 16, 2007, 7:19:47 AM
thanks i guess.lol

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i was here but now im gone, i thought my hands could do no Wrong, my life i took, my own accord, and truely death is my reward.

Find me on MySpace and be my friend!